Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
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Made this beat last week...
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Earsblower
Listen closely... Closer...
Hey there, first thing I heard was the "vocals" or "voices" I should say that are a bit too loud compared to everything else. Also the transitions are lacking, they do no sync well. As for the beat in general it sounds a bit chaotic and most of the sounds dont really fits with each others.
I know it's mostly negative but there's a lot of room for improvement and it's decent enough to know you can do it !
I know it's mostly negative but there's a lot of room for improvement and it's decent enough to know you can do it !
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
I appreciate your honest feedback...
Earsblower
Listen closely... Closer...
Sure man, I know it can be tough sometimes but this is how you can become better with time. We all been there.
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
For sure. Im new to this n want real opinions, so your feedback was helpful. I'm repost after I make changes too.
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
I added guitars to give it a fuller sound..
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Thanks for the advice.. I appreciate it. Ima make those changes n repost.
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Turned up the drums .. Im not sure how to use reverb or delay (kinda new to this). If it stills needs that, let me know
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Worked on this a little today.. Is it sounding better?
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
I been tryna smooth out the transitions to this.. Idk I think it sounds better, but not sure it's where it could be. Does everything flow well?
Nothing here yet.
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
Worked on it today..
you deleted the newer posts. this mix definitely needs mixed better and the vocal at the beginning needs help but when that goes away the beat is banging. I'd roll the second part of the beat and keep that vocal piece very low in the background for the chorus or lose it all together
Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
I deleted one since it would of been two of the same beat on the profile. But Im using 2 vocals n I think it's just overlapping in the beginning, so I'm work on that & try lowering the vocals for the chorus.
Thanks for the feedback, always helpful and much appreciated.
Thanks for the feedback, always helpful and much appreciated.
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Fyyn3stSymphoni
ILLIEN
Battle Points: 43
I removed a lot of the vocals on this.. So does it blend well or still sound like it's overlapping?