new beat & some bars... Hot/Not?

[Flip G]

I'm just try different styles out for a new project... the internet is my A&R process : )... leave feed back please... did this today...

 

[Earsblower]

Beat is pretty good. As for the vocals, it is good. Way better than what I heard before (Project 1 I think ?) Keep working man you're getting there.

 

[Kane the MOD]

I'm just try different styles out for a new project... the internet is my A&R process : )... leave feed back please... did this today...

dope.

Beats and vocals are dope.

Only input I have is that the hook is very repetitive. It works as it is but may be you try to spice it up a bit?

 

[unaufadox]

Got me moving in my seat on the chorus so...mission accomplished. The repetition works well. Liking the slight panning as well. No too crazy so it doesn't draw your attention away like 'oh what's that' .. u stay with it.

 

[JECHO]

I think it's a fun and catchy, has a good vibe. Few things that come to mind while listening:

-chorus felt a little long to me, maybe because it's repetitive. It's good, but I wonder if it would benefit by being cut down and/or shorten the main hook and implement a longer bridge.

-the transition into verse 1 felt a bit rushed or "too much" and I think for my ears it's the continuation of the bumpy hook immediately into a bumpy flow.

-2nd verse there were some bars that I think could benefit from another take

Overall solid work man. Just FYI I'm on my phone so can't comment on the mix, and my feedback is just from a perspective if we were working together and flipping this back and forth for feedback and edits. Good track, keep it up.

 

[Flip G]

I think it's a fun and catchy, has a good vibe. Few things that come to mind while listening:

-chorus felt a little long to me, maybe because it's repetitive. It's good, but I wonder if it would benefit by being cut down and/or shorten the main hook and implement a longer bridge.

-the transition into verse 1 felt a bit rushed or "too much" and I think for my ears it's the continuation of the bumpy hook immediately into a bumpy flow.

-2nd verse there were some bars that I think could benefit from another take

Overall solid work man. Just FYI I'm on my phone so can't comment on the mix, and my feedback is just from a perspective if we were working together and flipping this back and forth for feedback and edits. Good track, keep it up.

exactly what I was looking for... I'm having fun trying to get as good as possible through repetition... my latest shot at it:

 

[InsideOutBeats]

Hey man these are dope! Beats sound great and I’m loving the lyrical flow. “Dumb out” and “Ain’t what I do” both sound great, nice head nodding bounce!
Real nice work with these!